The Norton varsity team shocked many fans as they shot a total of 10 three pointers. Nobody could believe what they had just watched. The whole crowd went wild! On the other hand, the Rockland fans were not as rowdy at that point. For them, it was a sad thing to watch the opposing team shoot so many threes like it was their job. Norton lived up to their high expectations through this game.
Norton is not a team that disappoints. They were clearly the dominating team during this game. Rockland definitely did not play their best game last Thursday. Did they feel pressured because they were not the home team? The Norton crowd was very rowdy and Rockland could have felt more pressure because of this. In the end, it all depends on who is the better team, and Norton clearly was better in Thursdays game. Norton fought hard and the final score ended as 65-64. Congratulations to the Norton boy's varsity basketball team in advancing even farther into the tournament!

Your opening has the basic criteria for a lead but it very simple. Work on incorporating more engaging language throughout your post. Bring your readers to a specific highlight from the game. Or consider incorporating a quote from the crowd--where they cheering a specific line to pump the players up? What was the feeling of being in the crowd? Bring your reader to that moment.
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